Lead sentences is the starting of a story or a sentence. To make a story unique or intriguing, you need original lead sentences. I think I'm making much more progress since last week and my story is now getting more interesting.
Hi,my name is Anna and I go to Enrich every Wednesday with other kids. Enrich is a school for gifted and talented children. There are four corner stones that we are working on; the Affective Domain, Mental Edge Talent Development and the Concept Curriculum. This is my first year here as a year 5. This year we are learning about interactions.
Tuesday, August 23, 2011
Talent Development
Talent, Talent, Talent Development! Today we were still writing our stories but, we were improving them much more. Before we started to write today Katie showed us and interview with Roald Dahl. You know how he wrote about that Giant Peach? He actually got that idea from his own apple tree! We also got a sheet that had loads of stuff on it that you needed to have in your narrative story such as Word Pictures and Lead Sentences. Word Pictures are just like describing words. It's where you describe something, somewhere, or someone. It's just like painting a picture in the reader's head.
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